Tuesday, September 4, 2007

Combined Comments

Rating: 5.0

We lie tangled and entwined;
Embedded in each others skin
Staying silent; almost completely combined
Unknowing where our own hands begin
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Lynn Grassette
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Original Unknown Girl 13 September 2007

What a gorgeous penning Linley, the last stanza sings out from the page. (not sure about the last line, poem seems complete without it) . Beautiful poem though. HG: -) xx

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