Saturday, November 17, 2007

Comatose Disclosure Form Comments

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I wish to leave the confines of my body and flee my restless state of silent chaos
Escaping the binding mental chains placed on me with the contractual accurateness
Of a bullet through the temple of my cranium or an arrow through my beating heart
For when fermented drink no longer quenches my heavy thirst but instead renders
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Ted Sheridan
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Ray Lucero 17 November 2007

Ted, Fragile and finite humans wither and die. Let our passing be swift and without pain. A difficult subject and nice write. Peace, Ray PS I like your poem titles without all the ~*~ do-dads..thanks. Trade does it too...

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I beg you God to provide grace and mercy for my soul The time has come for me to go… please dont go from poem hunter..

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