Coma Victim Becomes Writer Of Children's Books Comments

This is terrific. You've got a great sense of humor. -chuck

This poem is LOL funny. The last lines are brilliant. It's always appropriate for the writer to take an ironic look at him or herself, and this one will amuse everyone. This poem is a good example of how short and sweet are often the best guidelines.

I enjoyed that, Lori! Thanks for sending it thru again, I'd seen it the first time around, not gotten to it, and then forgotten. You write children's stories too?

lol, you may have something there!