Coma ___ [italian] Comments

How refreshing to get back to your original poetry. On Keats' grave it is written: 'Here lies one whose name was writ in water'.

A sweet and artistic poem to read

A nice poem on psychoanalysis of a patient who undergoes pain, torture and fear.A heartfelt poem which portrays real feelings.Well expressed Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

a patient in a coma? grief, hope and death. great poem.

Is our memory saved after death? I pondered many times...and I incline to believe that the answer is No. I really like your poetical expression in this poem and the flow of it. Somehow your poem and my poem Desire, complement each other.

I was going to ask you if this was the same cemetary in which Keats and Shelley are buried, but you anticipated and answered my question in the affirmation.When I was an adolescent Shelley was my favorite poet. As I got older, I found myself shifting to Keats. And later still to Wordsworth. But all three are important to me. By the way, people have said WORDSWORTH DOES NOT TRANSLATE WELL IN OTHER EUROPEAN LANGUAGES, and that this is why his star does not shine brightly. Is that true? ? ! ! I'm puzzled. I hope you find the English vocabulary you need to pull off a translation of COMA. I am intriqued!

Dear reader, I ask your pardon. I've written this poem in Italian, then I've tried to translate it into English, but I don't like the result, so I prefer not making it public... F.F.