lingering memories in a coma,
Of the moon shining so bright,
Gazing brightly in the dark skies,
The galaxy bearing witness,
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From the perpelexion of our touch, Might you MEAN perplexion? ? : Perplexion dictionary definition | perplexion defined - YourDictionary perplexion. Noun. (plural perplexions) Condition or state of being perplex; perplexity. A sleep we fell, ............perhaps Asleep? or A sleep we felt? (cont.) ..
Perplexion you right, but A sleep we fell I.e it is an expression of instantly falling into a coma not the normal sleeping experience, Respire giving it a thought you right but I used it just to emphasize on breathing as the main Verb.
Hi Anzelyne, I am gone through a lot of editing of my earlier works and now have to read this wonderful piece of yours. Magically magneted to the feel, Breathless it was, A heart attack we thought, A sleep we fell, Forever in a coma of romance, It's harness makes us respire, Ever in a coma of love This is a wonderfully seductive and sensual passage, Nice, marvelous! , Paul
(cont.) .. respire? (maybe perspire i thought) i 'had to' look up respire, thinking breathe. i found this: verb: respire breathe. & (of a plant) : carry out respiration, especially at night when photosynthesis has ceased. & literary: recover hope, courage, or strength after a time of difficulty. great PHOTO! photoshopped? bri ;)
Thanks for lending your third eye stay blessed @Bri Edwards