Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Coma Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I lie in my comatosed mind
I hear voices with no eyes
All I see is darkness
with mixed images of my life
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Dave Alan Walker
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Geetha Jayakumar 15 September 2013

Wow. Wonderful poem.. Really Coma stage is quiet a horrible one..God heard your prayers and you are safe.. Loved reading it.

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Walterrean Salley 05 May 2012

a beautiful and powerful prayer. I know God heard it. Glad you're safe.

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Unwritten Soul 30 April 2012

The dark was so intense and there were two lights to choose...i picked one and i still walking inside that one...i think this is way to go eternal paradise! bye2 others take care! _Unwritten Soul

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Eman Obied 27 April 2012

wow what a beautiful poem, that creates a true unignorable sensation of how one could be taken into the darkness and then back to the light

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Heather Wilson 25 April 2012

A beautiful poem, so heartfelt.the description was wonderful.

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

Pudsey, Leeds
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