Sunday, July 31, 2005

Coma Comments

Rating: 3.9

The coma came and I wanted to shout,
I want out and then they came,
The dreams of death that made me feel ashamed.
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Leigh Ladd
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 01 September 2005

A very dark poem.....i liked the way it was written though.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 31 July 2005

Thanks, Leigh! Rather dark...but a well written piece. LSP

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