Tuesday, October 4, 2016

Column B Comments

Rating: 3.8

A building is being
dismantled across the street
from where I sit
reducing a laceration—
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Seamus O' Brian
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Tom Billsborough 25 November 2016

sometimes ordinary events become quality poems. This is one of them.

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Lorraine Colon 06 October 2016

Only you could write so captivatingly about a building being demolished. You held my attention to the very end, and I still looked for more. I hope you're checking the right boxes in columns A & B! The consequences could be devastating, ha So well written, Neal. Another 10!

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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