In this colourful, magical world,
7 billion people on earth,
I walk around them...
I see smiles,
...
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hey aisha so this is a very cute poem *i loove how happy and super positive it is * although you need some imagery to make it more rich and catchy in general very good ...keep it up girl
Thank you although I don't need to make it more rich or catchy it's just a poem I wrote my own way. If I wanted to be catchy and all that I would have done that. Thanks again x
second sstanza needs work........you repeated words there, tighten things more to make it a wonderful poem..the begining of the poem is super..you are a lovely poetess..love your poems...
I got meanings. ummmmm.... nice. Can i say it in your words? You're beautiful, special and unique.
A nice poem with a nice message.. Thank you for sharing Aisha :)