Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Colours Of The Rainbow Comments

Rating: 3.0

In this colourful, magical world,
7 billion people on earth,
I walk around them...
I see smiles,
...
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Aisha Alansari
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Souren Mondal 06 November 2015

A nice poem with a nice message.. Thank you for sharing Aisha :)

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Smile :) 19 February 2014

hey aisha so this is a very cute poem *i loove how happy and super positive it is * although you need some imagery to make it more rich and catchy in general very good ...keep it up girl

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Aisha Alansari 03 July 2015

Thank you although I don't need to make it more rich or catchy it's just a poem I wrote my own way. If I wanted to be catchy and all that I would have done that. Thanks again x

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Wahab Abdul 28 August 2013

second sstanza needs work........you repeated words there, tighten things more to make it a wonderful poem..the begining of the poem is super..you are a lovely poetess..love your poems...

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Hussein Ismael 28 August 2013

I got meanings. ummmmm.... nice. Can i say it in your words? You're beautiful, special and unique.

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