Thursday, August 1, 2013

Colours Of The Day Comments

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The flash of red sky in the morning
Against a rising orange sun:
Cool milky winds blowing gently
Across the open earth.
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David Wood
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Shahzia Batool 07 August 2013

Such is the poet's observant eye that sees colors, and such is the witty pen that describes them in words! ! !

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Danny Draper 01 August 2013

These are the simple things in life well described that are often missed or slip past each day.

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Ramesh Rai 01 August 2013

we do not care the changing color of our life since begining till end but our nature changes as per the changing color of life.great write

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Valsa George 01 August 2013

Nature's changing patterns are beautifully described! Unfortunately we are too busy to notice all these! Enjoyed! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 August 2013

Sky in many colors red, deep azure, pale blue, black mackerel, tinge of red, ...We need to look up and see and enjoy heavenly beauty. Nice flowing poem.

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Dave Walker 01 August 2013

A great poem, as we get older I think we tend to take more notice. But when we are young we are too wrapped up in everything else to see what is around us.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 August 2013

We are so busy that we dont have the time to see the changes of the day..Good poem..well written.

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