Friday, November 27, 2015

Colours Of My Skin. Comments

Rating: 4.8

They say I have colours,
Patches of black and white,
I'm fine with them,
Invisibly problem free,
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Anzelyne shideshe
COMMENTS

Today's Poet Of Day, featured on PoemHunter is Dr Fabrizio Frosini, our own Doctor Fab. Congratulations to him and all my fellow poets on PoemHunter. Deep appreciation

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Howard simon 27 July 2022

Lovely lines loaded with lessons for living that are both creative and compelling!

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Clinton Siegle 06 March 2020

Colour or color is interesting.. I am more pink than white. So.. colors dark, brown, pink, a bit white here, time is a question on ones mind.. which color makes it to the next round.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 07 April 2020

All about perceptions.Thanks for reading Clinton

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Prabir Gayen 14 January 2019

Tremendous beauty....such a powerful write..

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Anzelyne Shideshe 03 February 2019

Thanks Gayen

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Clinton Siegle 12 October 2018

thanks for sharing black and white patches.. keep on writing. you should just keep on sharing more poetry.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 26 November 2018

Thanks Clinton

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Bri Edwards 16 January 2018

i don't follow the whole poem, but it drew my interest. i'm glad you are comfortable with what you have vis a vis patches. to MyPoemList several 'personalities' (at least two i've heard of) in this country (U.S.) , who many would (or in years past would) call colored/coloured (now more likely called black) , including at one time Michael Jackson (singer) i believe, had 'patches'. so what? bri ;)

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Anzelyne Shideshe 29 March 2018

True be comfortable with who you are and no matter your short comings you can still be A great person if you accept your patches and counteract on them!

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Akhtar Jawad 02 September 2017

What is the issue with patches, For me they relate to beauty, Enhance the artistic within, Kill boredom, revive life..............A truly positive thinking is reflected in this impressive poem.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 22 September 2017

Thanks Akhtar jawed

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Chinedu Dike 16 January 2017

Beautiful insightful poem, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks poet

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Christopher Tye 07 November 2016

Wise words and a beautiful poem, we always place to much importance on what we see and not enough on our similarities.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 10 November 2016

You got it right thanks for reading through

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 21 October 2016

Love yourself, be satisfied with the you are, that is what I see here. Thank you for sharing, poet.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 05 November 2016

Yes dear

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Rose Kanana 12 September 2016

A deep message driven here, the 2 shades described but the best comes out of the perception of colorless.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 22 August 2017

Thanks Rose

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Adolphus Moses 26 August 2016

I classify it as angry poem.. nice one..

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Kim Barney 24 July 2016

Very nice poem and lovely picture to accompany it. The color of our skin is not nearly as important as what is in our hearts. Our thoughts and feelings make us who we are. Thanks for sharing this poem.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 26 July 2016

Exactly you Göt it right thanks for Reading.

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Chinedu Dike 19 June 2016

Beautiful train of thought nicely articulated in good poetic diction with conviction. An inspirational poem bristling with knowledge. Thanks for sharing Shideshe. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 20 June 2016

Thanks dear poet for the wise thoughts im humbled.

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Sykolodyne Igbalaye 24 May 2016

Good one here am colorless too Poet.

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Thanks for Reading Sykolodyne

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Anas Affan 30 March 2016

nice creative poem.............keep on writing

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Anzelyne Shideshe 30 March 2016

Thanks Mohammed

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Galina Italyanskaya 27 March 2016

I like it very much, Anzelyne! Nice idea)

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Anzelyne Shideshe 28 March 2016

thanks dear poetess.

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Lucas Mmaduabuchi 26 March 2016

Creative, patches of black and white, colour is my skin.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 26 March 2016

Colour is once perspective, but every perspective is invalid unless scrutinized.lets understand each other no matter who we are! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 March 2016

Natural! ! ! With the muse of life. Nice work.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 26 March 2016

Thanks Edward kofi Louis for reading

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A compelling, creative an colorless composition.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 09 February 2016

Thanks for reading Howard.

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