They say I have colours,
Patches of black and white,
I'm fine with them,
Invisibly problem free,
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Lovely lines loaded with lessons for living that are both creative and compelling!
Colour or color is interesting.. I am more pink than white. So.. colors dark, brown, pink, a bit white here, time is a question on ones mind.. which color makes it to the next round.
thanks for sharing black and white patches.. keep on writing. you should just keep on sharing more poetry.
i don't follow the whole poem, but it drew my interest. i'm glad you are comfortable with what you have vis a vis patches. to MyPoemList several 'personalities' (at least two i've heard of) in this country (U.S.) , who many would (or in years past would) call colored/coloured (now more likely called black) , including at one time Michael Jackson (singer) i believe, had 'patches'. so what? bri ;)
True be comfortable with who you are and no matter your short comings you can still be A great person if you accept your patches and counteract on them!
What is the issue with patches, For me they relate to beauty, Enhance the artistic within, Kill boredom, revive life..............A truly positive thinking is reflected in this impressive poem.
Beautiful insightful poem, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing.
Wise words and a beautiful poem, we always place to much importance on what we see and not enough on our similarities.
Love yourself, be satisfied with the you are, that is what I see here. Thank you for sharing, poet.
A deep message driven here, the 2 shades described but the best comes out of the perception of colorless.
Very nice poem and lovely picture to accompany it. The color of our skin is not nearly as important as what is in our hearts. Our thoughts and feelings make us who we are. Thanks for sharing this poem.
Beautiful train of thought nicely articulated in good poetic diction with conviction. An inspirational poem bristling with knowledge. Thanks for sharing Shideshe. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.
Colour is once perspective, but every perspective is invalid unless scrutinized.lets understand each other no matter who we are! ! !
A compelling, creative an colorless composition.
Today's Poet Of Day, featured on PoemHunter is Dr Fabrizio Frosini, our own Doctor Fab. Congratulations to him and all my fellow poets on PoemHunter. Deep appreciation