Thursday, September 7, 2017

Colours Of My Desire - 06: Blue Comments

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Desire in me to be

The dearest and nearest to you
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D Priyanka Singh 08 September 2017

Desire in me to be The dearest and nearest to you With a jest for being in and around you In the stretch of the sky and waves of the sea In the forests of my passion and deserts of my longings Nicely penned. 10++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 September 2017

Desire in me to be The dearest and nearest to you With a jest for being in and around you In the stretch of the sky and waves of the sea Wow what a love! Nice poem. 10+++

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Anita Aparajita Das 08 September 2017

Desire in me to be The dearest and nearest to you With a jest for being in and around you In the stretch of the sky and waves of the sea In the forests of my passion and deserts of my longings To accommodate whole of me in you and you in me Wow, nice one. 10+

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Sabita Sahoo 08 September 2017

Desire in me to be The dearest and nearest to you With a jest for being in and around you In the stretch of the sky and waves of the sea Beautiful. 10++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 08 September 2017

With a jest for being in and around you In the stretch of the sky and waves of the sea In the forests of my passion and deserts of my longings To accommodate whole of me in you and you in me A beautiful definition of blue colour. 10+++

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