Sunday, January 3, 2010

Colours Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Contoured, contained and seceted in white,
colour glides imperceptively, then mutates.

It fluctuates, sways and flickers, underlit
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Fay Slimm
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The colour of this poem is alive and beautiful! Well done my friend.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 January 2010

Dancing with filtered hues, it materializes and clarifies shimmering rainbows, spiced with glamour to brighten monotone eyes.................... earthly life yet needs raves up through colors as rainbow by nature reels through vibgyor.............wonderful imagery of life by art of pants in colors, yet ingenious,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Deanna Holcomb 12 January 2010

Fay your ability to pen the beauty of the natural world is an absolute gift. I so enjoyed this poem as I do all the 'colors' of your work....There is such an honest appreciation the natural world for you that you inspire others to see it in your writing...Keep writing. I need it LOL

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Carol Gall 03 January 2010

wow such colors immesnse fantastic glowing

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Fay Slimm

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