Thursday, July 16, 2009

Colours Of Beauty Unfolds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like into a kaleidoscope I peeped,
One eye squeezed shut
And the other one open wide,
Mouth open agape
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Reshma Ramesh
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Sadiqullah Khan 05 August 2009

Hail the Day Greek the lover speaks when unaware The language of love is not like the one You read and you write goes to the worms What you see and feel is the soul of being Much spoken is this for real and unreal What self is to unself but the songs of the birds Wake me up for the beauty of the day The big men fall like the tower of Pisa in recline Hail the day whose evening shall see the happy verse Once again my love come that way That way when my eyes would wait for long The way when the cold dew would fall On the burning heat of desire in my bosom

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 05 August 2009

The many colours of you love, a rainbow to find...10

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Anjali Sinha 27 July 2009

wowwwwwwwww colours stunning poem anjali

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Sonya Florentino 26 July 2009

captivating... indeed life colors the world and makes everything beautiful!

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Simply stunning writing Reshma. The images of the kaleidoscope stayed with me through your poem and I could see it all, in all its splendor. So imaginative and romantic. 10 Karin Anderson

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Tobias Caldicott 20 July 2009

I love it so lovely

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Indira Renganathan 18 July 2009

Colours of gentle romance unfurled....10

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a lovely romance in that intimacy...beautifully done as usual....10

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Tsira Goge 17 July 2009

Reshma, It's Beautiful minor.... 10.. Tsira

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Carol Gall 16 July 2009

colors unfold beautiful passion

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

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