Monday, May 10, 2010

Colours In My Head Comments

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Blush Red with lips a tingle
The passionate kiss we shared.

Silver baubles on the tree
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Mark Sellen 29 January 2012

simple / romantic / and nicely set around colours -catches the imagination - like it

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Kim Davies 13 May 2010

Hi Lesley, I like this poem much better, its really lovely! I had missed the 'rainbow' spelling on your first draught so I think you have gained far more than you lost with the re-write. well done, hope i can get inspired to get cracking. x

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