Colours Dispersed... Comments

I really admire the tonal shifts in this work, - - from that which was youthful optimism and playfulness to some grim realizations. Part of growing up, perhaps an inevitable part, is a loss of innocence. This gem goes right to myfavourites.

And it was later I came to know that I could sink! This is what passion of youth is...... great poem! It is refreshing to experience such wonderful thoughts and imagery through poetry.

A profound work. It's interesting to see life through the spectrum of colors. Green symbolises hope n the way forward. Enjoyed reading.

Spectrum is your skin color, the same colour when you speak and write...A beautiful work..really nice Ali

a rainbow of life's journey.....................but green is that takes you forward with hope...........may u stay so...

lovely poem.....expressing the colours of life.

The colour of life itself.....a blend of pink blue black yet its upto us to keep it forever green.....a poem that surely will b evergreen...

Colors are spreading everywhere. Every color extending its own charm. Life is a delight. Nice poem. Thank you.

the life is seen through the allegory of colors, a well-wrought composition, and with many memorable phrases like: He who travels... he will breathe! ... - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

a wonderful poem, i enjoyed reading it.10+++

i love this Colours Dispersed is a great name for this...10 +++

wow lovely u made me dip myself in those myraid colours of the rainbow a tenner from me anjali

Shashendra Amalshan (5/19/2009 1: 27: 00 PM) | Delete this message Let's feel... 'let's listen... when there is silence ... no one speaks! and let's give the way to roots may this pale... ... love GREEN' very true indeed, ....love green..great poem for the modern times....wish u well Ali...son of Adam...10++++

wow, ...what a poem dear friend....wish you all the best :) Hataw

hi Ali... this is really colourful poem... i like how the color go with the events... your an amazing poets..keep writting...

Dear Ali, This is a really good poem linking colours with life in its various exposition. All colours added together is White and absense of all colours make it Black. Without a really large White canvas you coudn't have made this large picture with giant and fine strokes.The only colour missing in your cavas is Red which is now covering most of the land, the Earth is having, through Terrorism, economic and political wars.The choice of words, presentation of imagery and overall the poem is thought provoking. Thanks for sharing A-10- from me -Rajkumar

hi Ali u went rt through the rainbow....and painted a huge canvas in giant strokes great writing cheers

Reading and re-reading I am still trying to find out the entire beauty of the verse.

Quite an apropos title for this poem, as it takes on a spectrum of pictorial, and flamboyant imagery...Well Done, Ali. F j R (09)

it feels so good 2 read this....its wonderfully written....