Thursday, April 25, 2013

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Loud, so loud all of the time
So I set me down to rhyme
Outside my head, the voices rage
Inside myself a quiet cage
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Xelam Kan™ 31 January 2014

not bad bit it could be more better if garlanded with metaphors, similes and a slight touch of other figurative tools. poetry is something like a portrait, for example u gonna describe a thing differently

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