Green is the carpet that covers the hill
White is the sheep who is eating his fill,
Blue is the curtain that hangs overhead
Black is the darkness that's better not said.
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I love the ending to this poem, I think that it's incredibly fitting. It's beautifully done Mr. Brown, thanks.
A lovely poem, very visual. Liked the way it developed into the ending.
..lovely are poems..when they are told..like you did.. ..a very colorful poem..keep it up..
A beautiful rainbow painted within your words...poetry has afforded me the hues to decorate my life. A lovely poem indeed. PEACE