Wednesday, August 22, 2012

Colours Comments

Rating: 3.8

Green is the carpet that covers the hill
White is the sheep who is eating his fill,
Blue is the curtain that hangs overhead
Black is the darkness that's better not said.
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John Carter Brown
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Susan Lacovara 29 December 2013

A beautiful rainbow painted within your words...poetry has afforded me the hues to decorate my life. A lovely poem indeed. PEACE

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Aaliya Manji 26 November 2013

I love the ending to this poem, I think that it's incredibly fitting. It's beautifully done Mr. Brown, thanks.

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Susy Evelyne 23 October 2013

A lovely poem, very visual. Liked the way it developed into the ending.

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Rigzin Namgyal 10 October 2012

..lovely are poems..when they are told..like you did.. ..a very colorful poem..keep it up..

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