Tuesday, May 8, 2007

Colouring Existence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting here, feeling the rain slide down my hair
Lunch apples lumped in my hand
Two pints of milk clinging to my clawed fingers
Now sheltering in the office fridge until coffee time
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Anthony Dalby
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Ian Bowen 16 February 2009

Anthony, some enjoyable lines in your well written piece. Ian

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J Hb 02 September 2007

'A connection so intense The colours around sang in joy I gently fold the jewels of your being in my soul' yummylicious! '...dance with me on a cloud...'

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Angela Norris 08 May 2007

'Lunch apples lumped in my hand' good line.

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