Sunday, September 25, 2022

Colourful Love Comments

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In the jingle of your bracelet,
In the kohl that lined your emerald eyes,
In the vermillion of your lips,
I see my love soothing.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Indira Renganathan 09 October 2022

Excellent write with apt wise metaphors...the title is lovely.. like it a lot

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Juhaina Tumlu 26 September 2022

Wow so well written poem, very crafty and articulate.

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Zumas Millamo 25 September 2022

In the tangerine mornings, In the Aureole of water hanging on your hair, In the fuchsia blush that rises on your cheeks, I see our love shining.

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Martinez Salotori 25 September 2022

Indeed a colourful love. Much appreciate.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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