As we stood solemnly
looking down at that deep hole
each of us tears held in our eyes.
We bowed our heads
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This poem is a most imaginative expression of grief and sadness. Colors have the power to affect the emotional self and roses are too an expression of love and compassion. You have combined them very effectively in this tender-hearted poem about saying goodbye. Very touching piece. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I enjoyed the story-like feel to this one David Again another glowing one from you All the best Love duncan X
David, this is such a meaningful and beautiful poem and colors have been the focus of it all. Each color with its different meaning brings a different dimension to your poem....10 love Karin