Sunday, August 30, 2009

Coloured Roses Comments

Rating: 5.0

As we stood solemnly
looking down at that deep hole
each of us tears held in our eyes.
We bowed our heads
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David Harris
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David, this is such a meaningful and beautiful poem and colors have been the focus of it all. Each color with its different meaning brings a different dimension to your poem....10 love Karin

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Alison Cassidy 04 September 2009

This poem is a most imaginative expression of grief and sadness. Colors have the power to affect the emotional self and roses are too an expression of love and compassion. You have combined them very effectively in this tender-hearted poem about saying goodbye. Very touching piece. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Duncan Wyllie 31 August 2009

I enjoyed the story-like feel to this one David Again another glowing one from you All the best Love duncan X

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Carol Gall 30 August 2009

a most beautiful write david

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Bradfield, England
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