I can feel the colour of you
my brush can depict your face
my pencil the out-lines of your being
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This poem reminds me of a book which have ment a lot to me. Djamilia by Chingiz Aïtmatov. 'I can see the melody of your song' you write. This is a very clever image of music. Thank you.
I can see the melody of your song the song of your heart the harmony that resonates in your so.....my heart can hear that song......... very poetic in your presentation dear poetess. tony