Monday, February 7, 2011

Colour Of You Comments

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I can feel the colour of you
my brush can depict your face
my pencil the out-lines of your being
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Lola Sanchez
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 November 2018

I can see the melody of your song the song of your heart the harmony that resonates in your so.....my heart can hear that song......... very poetic in your presentation dear poetess. tony

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Espen Øye Bjørkvold 07 February 2011

This poem reminds me of a book which have ment a lot to me. Djamilia by Chingiz Aïtmatov. 'I can see the melody of your song' you write. This is a very clever image of music. Thank you.

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Lola Sanchez 10 November 2018

Thank you! I'll surely look into reading the novel.

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Pretoria, Gauteng South Africa
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