Monday, June 15, 2009

Colour Of Hope. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Young and hung with fresh greenery
Stands hope, bursting with dreams, leafing
Itself warily over drab feelings,
Flirting insistently, being
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Fay Slimm
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Eyan Desir 27 June 2009

Poetic and thoughful super........ 10 points

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Could yet be still. Hope is evergreen., , , , ya it is hope that keeps u life...... good write der read minehope against hope

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yes HOPE is evergreen... excellent colour beautifully written Fay...thanks best regards, jdh

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 June 2009

Excellent poem, nice title. Hope is evergreen like teen. Positive poem.10+++

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Tia Maria 15 June 2009

Absolute poetry... absolute hope... absolutely beautiful 10+++++++ PS - Absolutely mortified our big evergreen just died ; -)

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Susan Jarvis 15 June 2009

Bursting with zest and energy, Fay. If these are 'green shoots of recovery' this country has been promised, then 'hope' is the operative word! A spectacular metaphor. S :)

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Catrina Heart 15 June 2009

Truly well said HOPE is really an evergreen..........lovely excellent poem...10+++

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