Monday, December 15, 2008

Colour Me Love. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Colour me bubbles of misty-blue love.
Blow them, drifting on soundless high cloud.
I wait here, gratefully searching above
The whispering sky, knowing the ether around
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Fay Slimm
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Kevin Wells 27 December 2008

Beautiful and masterfully evocative. Typical 'Fay'.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 December 2008

Th exodus of my love will shower your brightly color of love.Beautiful writes Fay.I'll read more of yours soon.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 December 2008

This has a great imagery. Especially the second stanza is versatile, superb composition.

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Karen Clements 21 December 2008

What a beautiful verse, simply stunning! ! You are trully wonderful x

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I been blown away. as a matter of fact. this still got me floating.. I love it

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Kevin Eaglesfield 15 December 2008

Awesome, Fay.Beautiful.I won't see the slate skies tomorrow, I'll see your words and what they do.Kev xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 December 2008

Love colours our world, when in love how brighter our world.. Andy 10

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Kris Smith 15 December 2008

My friend this is one of the most stunning pieces of verse I have read in a long time, to my eyes it brings delight 10 ++++ Chris

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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