Thursday, October 16, 2008

Colors Of Paradise Comments

Rating: 3.2

this sentient, sensuous mind
has learned the art of
dreams refined...
my powder pink
...
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wardha jawdat
COMMENTS
Sarwar Chowdhury 28 October 2008

oh! Its a big WOW poem! excellent expression! .....10+

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 23 October 2008

WOW..THATS A RARE MASTERPIECE...! ! !

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Dr W Jawdat kudos for sharing this hidden gem! ! ! well cut and polished

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 16 October 2008

Dr. Jawdat has a happy touch upon an intriguing reality made with ivory, darkness, coldness, veils. The senses act the bosses, with a fine result.

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Marvin Brato 16 October 2008

Explicit poem filled depicts a hungered love and passion. Thanks for sharing.

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David Threadgold 16 October 2008

Very good thanks for the read. Regards Dave T

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