Sunday, July 1, 2007
Colors Inter=met Comments
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rays of red, coruscating
and waves that shed,
glimmering diaphanous
silky mantle of tinted hues
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7/23/2025 8:58:13 PM # 1.0.0
this has a great feel to it Simon and the subject is well utilised until the last line. You dealt with verbs and adjectives as nouns, it is on this level that it works. The final line, which you bring in concrete things, pulls the rug out from under this, otherwise, craftly constructed piece.