Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Colors And Promises! Comments

Rating: 5.0

and then i see in my mirror
was it beginning or the end?
or was i lonely again
i see the chapter end
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priyanka gyanchandani
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Jazib Kamalvi 20 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Priyanka g. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Federico del Corazón 21 December 2011

The poem reads well, reads as of you poured yourself in it

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 21 December 2011

very nice....'..and then i see those moments fade.....and i see those colors and promises shed'....nice ending

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Ramesh Rai 21 December 2011

Really, i appreciate your endeavour, may i like to invite you to read my poems with best wishes ramesh rai rkrai100@gmail.com

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