Colors Comments

wonderful ink.each colour has its significance.loved it.

Really nice.. you show the power of colors by light display >> maybe some of us never think the color is that importance but it is.. can't live without it.. like the rain, no meaning without the rainbow.. ^_^ well done, and keep writing.. Faith Angel..

Creative.....stroong vision...gd choice of words...colorful very color give you specific feeling colors sometimes, cause your wounds healing Well done mirna i like it

Compelling creative and colourful. Well done.10/10

you analyzed well the Colors! a perfect rhyme and a beautiful description/ Purple is grief but sometimes, it is the colors' chief--> my favorite a colorful 10 PeaCe&LoVe,

This is beautiful, the colours and the qualities they represent, you did express them well.

Hi Merna - Nice poem I have scored it a TEN. I am a scientist and color is so so important. The visible spectrum Red - Orange - Yellow - Green - Blue - Indigo - Violet occupies the cente of the electromagnetic spectrum which streches from radio waves (low energy) to gamma rays (high energy) . God gave man the ability to differeniate between colors because color was such an important feature of his Creation. Each color has a specific vibration and therefore affects us differently and hospitals use COLORTHERAPY in the decoration of their rooms. I like the allocations you have given RED - JOY YELLOW - BRIGHTNESS GREEN - RELAXATION (which is why God made vegetation green) BLUE - CALM (sky color) WHITE - FAITH (all the colors blended together) BLACK - ELEGANCE (the absence of color) PURPLE - GRIEF (the color with the highest emoional energy) BROWN - NEUTRAL (color of the bare earth) . My favorite color is purple - GOOD GRIEF! The form of your poem is an excellent allocation of a rhyming couplet to each color. The metre (number of syllables in each line) could be improved which would give it more flow. The beauty of the poem is the allocation of each color to a specific character. Love in Poetry - JOHN.

aMMMMMazing poetic narration! nice! 10++

I wonder if you are artistic as well as poetic.You have dealt with your subject well here so maybe you will be an artist one day. You have a high value on what colour can do for us and what is says about us. You paint well with words.That's poetry.

Did you think before about the colors? ? they spread in everywhere; in clothes&flowers............they are areseen inrainbow too inthe formof vibgyor....beautiful write....10 read mne .....colour

'' Purple is grief but sometimes, it is the colors' chief ''.. i like this couple of lines.. so funny & cute.. so cheerful..

this is the best poem about colours ever I SWEAR! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ur really a great poet god bless you 10+++++

this poem had coloured my day.

yes, different colors have been discovered but the legend is only one, the crystal white...beautiful expression, colors have different meanings..grace

Lovely edifying composition on color. Love it with 10+

you give colorful dressing to the word color there...pleasing write, Merna...thanks...10

Each color do its mission by relaxing you by just the vision love this stanza of your poem colors..I agre with the explanations of colors you did very perfectly..hope you like my 8th color poem..there are seven but I believe there are 8... well done good poetess... best of luck

A very nice theme and it is indeed a reality that colors do have some psychological effect on ones mood.......Presenting life in form of colors is a very rare quality and if one adopts it, life becomes really colorful and cheerful.............a very beautiful poem.........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

wwoww wwwowww a very niceeee poem with avery niceeeee poet, l have know by your poem anew things about colour (5msy b3dkda lhsen 7tn7sdy) l like your rhyme, your way of writing and your feeling with your poem. lt's anew idea. great great interesting 10\10 well done and keep writing

A very well written poem indeed, Merna. Very interesting observations about color and it's great significance in our lives. Well done....10... Best wishes Richard