Monday, December 29, 2008

Colors Comments

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Color the past an off-shade of haze,
a thin, plastic film laid over what was.
Color it happy or lonely, but gone.
Color the past an off-shade of love.
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William Kruse
color future
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C.R. Clark 02 January 2009

Oh boy! I really like this poem, especially the first two verses. I do hope the future is less dark than bright. To me the 'deep shade of void' of the third verse relates to the future being a mystery, unknown. Very well done, my friend. A 10 indeed. Richard

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William Kruse

William Kruse

Armour, South Dakota, U.S.A.
William Kruse
William Kruse
Armour, South Dakota, U.S.A.
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