Friday, August 12, 2011

Colorless Rainbows Comments

Rating: 0.0

mrs. moon stole the pot of gold
when the sky showered the earth with love and wrath.
mrs. moon stole the pot of gold
while the sun was taking its steamy bath.
...
Read full text

Estrellita Dedel
COMMENTS
Naida Nepascua Supnet 17 September 2011

i like the personification you give to mrs.moon i find it cute also i like the theme because i seem to imagine bedtime stories nice cute poem

0 0 Reply
Estrellita Dedel 14 August 2011

Thanks, Unwritten Soul. Hahaha! The intent of writing the poem is actually political.

0 0 Reply
Unwritten Soul 13 August 2011

Nice title! ! , but if rainbow turn to colorless, it not being rainbow as itself anymore...We know, rainbow always there but hiding in the light, reveal after rain...So dont worry if rainbow loose it colors coz it just hiding behind the spectrum of light :) _Unwritten Soul

0 0 Reply
Estrellita Dedel

Estrellita Dedel

Davao City, Philippines
Close
Error Success