Monday, February 10, 2014

Colorful Vision Comments

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The eyes were closed but the vision was bright
The sight was rough but sharp as laser beams
Yet it was dim but there is inner light
Enclosed to the region of living dreams
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Mac Adrone Adonay
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Hira Akhtar 18 February 2014

well Mac its a brilliant poem about mental panorama of a man who is unable to see...your poem reeminded me of hellen keller, a great courageous lady you might read about about her have you? ? ? ? In her novel 'three days to see' she said that 'i who cannot see can find hindreds of things to interest me through mere touch...same case for the blind man in your poem..good one :)

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