Saturday, July 24, 2021

Colorful Toys And The Doomsday Comments

Rating: 5.0

I listen to the call for prayers in the mosques,
I listen to the bells of churches and temples,
In front of my eyes is an asteroid sent by my god,
So you are going to end this sinful world, oh my lord!
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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 July 2021

A colourful poem sir! Thanks for sharing! !

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M Asim Nehal 26 July 2021

Fantastic poem after a long gap, worth reading your poems everytime.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 July 2021

To my Favourites. I will read this brilliant poem time and again. Thank you, Akhtar Sir!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 July 2021

Most pleasant poem to read this morn. Excellently worded and loveliest rendered. I have enjoyed very much, Akhtar Sir.5 Stars full on Top! Marvelous poem. Very interesting

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 July 2021

A well crafted and conveyed poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 July 2021

We feel the great fear and wonderful love of family vividly depicted in this beautifully crafted poem. Yes, the coming of doomsday is like a sword hanging above our head ready to strike anytime

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