Colorful Bubbles! Comments

Pain shrinks in to drop of tears. Soaking and rinse the bubbles of past in wise mind that makes up for washing pain. This pain we wash while we rise towards God with beloved mind make up. This poem is Very amazingly penned...10

Ladder of life goes from past into the future. Maybe present is just the step one places on the ladder. A thoughtful poem.

Marvellous. speaks to the heart. Speaks for a lot of us. We dwell on the past though it gives pain. We all need to live in the moment. The feeling of being stuck in the past is beautifully expressed through this succinct gem of a piece.

It is difficult to extricate oneself from the haunting memories of the past....! But we have to somehow learn to forget the past and try to live in the present......! Like bubbles, we should allow the past to burst in us!

Am I going to soak and rinse in bubbles of past I know not where I am going right now for sure! Yes life is always uncerain.We cling to known and secured terrains of past.We have to keep faith in ourselves and concentrate in the present.Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

Happy to see that you came back here.No confusion. This poem on the beautiful track

A poignant write. Short and good.

Very tender and sensitive poem on emotions that hit us all. Finding a path is as hard as walking upon it and our doubts always dog us. You expressed it so well. Welcome to Poemhunter again. So good to read your heartfelt poetry.

Often it is difficult to disentangle from the web of the past and I too often find myself as a victim of it. But as Susan says, it is important that we concentrate on the present so that we can arrive at a better future. Outstanding write!

Inspirational and nicely penned. Thank you, Geetha

I don't know what happened in the past but I know it's better to forget the past. You have already put your first steps on the ladder of present, but I am not looking at you. I am looking at the top and that's your future. Continue your journey of life with full confidence that a lovely bright future is ahead of you. By the way the poem on pain is an outstanding poem.

This situation of dilemma is prevalent in everyone's life. You have used metaphor bubbles to represent them perfectly.10

When will I come out of past and Climb the ladder of present. Am I going to soak and rinse in bubbles of past? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -this is a good image for that question. While the past has shaped our present and we do need to know the whys and hows and whats of those decisions we made so that we learn, we need to then concentrate on the present and make better choices so we can arrive at a better present someday Very well written, Geetha Jayakumar and the above image is spectacular!