Monday, December 11, 2017

Colored Trees Comments

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I got down from the bus that morning,
reached the intersection with the red stop warning.
The road in front stretching it's arms left and right,
As, I am waiting for the ‘Walk 'signal, and the ‘Green' light.
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Kusum Gala
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Shikha Mahajan 08 June 2020

Beautiful artwork of words... 👏👏👏 lovely👌👌

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Houda Boukassoula 13 January 2018

It's cold outside but my soul is feeling the heat, Of the amazing little things in sight, in sky, and in the breeze. I liked the pictures in your poem to the point that Ifelt I was walking with you in the same street

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Kudum 20 May 2020

Thank you so much for inspiring words.

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Ravi Kopra 14 December 2017

Sound a little like Wordsworth here. Good poem.

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Kusum Gala 18 December 2017

I am honored..thank you so much!

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Chinedu Dike 13 December 2017

Good rendition of words with captivating images. Beautiful piece of poetry nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Kusum.

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Kusum Gala 18 December 2017

I read few of your poems and they are beautifully articulated and a very higher level of maturity. I feel my poetry is like a kids poem. So thank you so much for encouraging words.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2017

A very nice nature poem replete with imagery.. liked it..

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 December 2017

Kusum, such a heartwarming write👍👍👍

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Kusum Gala 18 December 2017

Thanks Bernard!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 December 2017

Kus, such a heartwarming write👍👍👍

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 December 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Kusum G. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 11 December 2017

Obviously nature is best and poets make it more beautiful. Keep up

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Kusum Gala 18 December 2017

Thank you!

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