Sunday, February 24, 2008

Coloratura Comments

Rating: 3.8

I rediscovered you tonight
after a lengthy absence,
flourishing on the threshold
of a clover leaf,
...
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Gregory Wm. Gunn
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2015

Autumnal eye perceived you during maidenhead time in all your nubile élan.....Very amazing expression that touches the heart of reader. Fantastic composition shared really. Goddess Diana continues to sing and dance in your enchanting eyes.......Interesting and wise sharing...10

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2015

Great imagery and nicely written poem...10

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Francie Lynch 21 November 2015

Imagery reigns here. Well-done.

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David Wood 21 November 2015

Lovely delightful poem, excellent diction. Worthy 10.

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Tsira Goge 02 March 2008

Gregory, These are poems the Magic flower of winter...

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I was gripped by the first two lines... who couldn't relate to that... and then I fell in love with the rest. Another piece I wish I had written...so pensive, free-flowing and eloquent, not a word wasted.... t x

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Gregory Wm. Gunn

Gregory Wm. Gunn

Windsor, On., Canada
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