Tuesday, April 21, 2009

Color Me Not Comments

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Tears of frustration pour down her face,
She can not figure out her place.
Her eyes see no color.
Not black, white, yellow, nor brown.
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Elizabeth Middleton
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Harley Roth 01 May 2009

I love how you were doing color discrimination. It definately tells you a great story and it kept my attention. Good beat in this poem.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

this is truly a poetic poem! brilliantly done! excellent 10+++ bravo

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