Sunday, October 18, 2009

Color Me Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cloud and gloom hang low
Sunshine nowhere in sight
Herein lies autumn mood
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Kesav Easwaran 10 July 2010

What luminous work of poetry! Nice work Almedia...provides sweet soothing read...10

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Saadat Tahir 08 June 2010

hey ALM... some lines are so potent...almost palpable... Trees stand bare with limbs- Just as empty as my arms Color the sadness With a coat of autumn: most likedd these... a great snap of natures moods...and how it effects those in its old...well done..ma'am cheers and ten

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Loved thispoem. Evolving from one season to another. Vivid in imagination.

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Lynn Glover 17 May 2010

Beautifully written. I was pulled right into the poem and saw all the glorious colors you painted with your words. I enjoyed my autumn walk. thanks my friend. Lynn

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 April 2010

Autumn touches ‘…Autumn a mosaic of them all…’ and the mosaic with all its valor in ‘Lows’ and makes ‘Low’ great Melancholy has a mellowed soothing beauty and its reflected poetically in terms of season…thanks Ma’am Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Dulakshi Wakista 26 February 2010

What a beautiful poem.You've coloured my life and my heart pleasure filled dances with the colourful words.I enjoyed very much.10 for content. Thanks for sharing.

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Jake Shelvey 07 February 2010

Beautiful and vibrant, full of colour and beauty

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And this picturesque poem is a work of art! The seasons are predetermined and you have written a beautiful piece bringing your awareness and imagery to the reader. 10 love Karin

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 October 2009

Color the sadness With a coat of autumn: Make winter the etching; .sadness is sign of autumn and it is reality of life.. it should be understood properly as no one is mortal and has to fall on ground.. Natuare has it s rules and so we have to adjust accordigly and paint the mood within..lovely and beautiful write with clear message......10 humbe submission..... beautiful world

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 23 October 2009

you are a great literary artist in poetry! This one is great!

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Kuji Soliman 20 October 2009

Beautifull poem! ! the first stanza was my favourite.! ! I miss reading your poetry, i was very sad today and this made me feel better! : D

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Claude H Oliver Ii 19 October 2009

I like the contrast and the conclusion. Good write.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 18 October 2009

a beautiful poetry on the seasons...barren tree like my arms..autmn an oil painting...lovely imagery...10

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Catrina Heart 18 October 2009

beautiful poetry crafted with the seasons of the year...well done!

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