Color Blind Comments

Ana, you have beautifully brought out the idea inside your mind in this write...the concept there is noble and great...a no-surgery treatment tip for the so called Color Blinds...10

Ana, this is trully a beautifull write, and you have mastered this so beautifully, your imagery is so vivd, you can actually see, and hear the birds, and brilliantly see the glorious rainbow, which is painted so beautifully... This ana, is by far, a favorite of mine inwhich so far you have written.... Love can make rainbows when the sky is gray.......... Bonnie

the brilliance of this poem is clearly and vividly expressed.outstanding job

You have a unique gift in ways yet even I cannot put in words..dreams of color to some are not common to all..color on..thank you..much..iip

Hi Ana, you are as sweet as your love work, imaginative, colorful, uncomplicated, however I didn't know really if I'm right because I'm neophyte as a reviewer. I found small errors in tenses such as 'realize, notice, etc.'. Well anyway, I consider the work excellent for a young lady.

This is a very creative writing. I love to read something new. It is very refreshing to see the imagination of young people at work. This was a very good example of that. Taking something very basic and simple and clearly stating a new vision of her reality that was genuine and symbolic of her life. The reader did not have to struggle with anything at all. Truly lovely. GW62

I JUST LOVE THIS POEM! IT IS REALLY WONDERFUL! SWEET! COLORS MEAN ALOT TO ME! TO ALL HUMAN BEINGS! TO LIFE! THIS POEM ONE OF THE MOST AMAZING POEM I HAVE READ ON HERE! COLOR BLIND-> I'M JUST DIVING INSIDE! KEEP WRITING SWEET GIRL!

Some people stand looking at the TV. and wonder where the rainbow is until it comes on the TV. The window is reality. PLUS: the rainbow is GODS covenant with man that he will not flood the earth again like in the flood of NOAH.