Eyes color blind shut irritant to light,
egoistic visions blur the brain,
deter the mind from appreciating the virtues
in others, in the blessed environs
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A good thoughtful poem! After reading what is happening to our Indian students in Australia, a thought has occured in my mind, that may be if the world was colour blind, racial segregation would have been left behind! 10+ -Raj Nandy
Colorblindness creeps in ones mind as a disability leading to catastrophic changes in life. Blurring of brain is an impairment that makes one more vulnerable and dependent. A disease well elaborated in poetic form. Regards Naseer
The exact phasic drift from normal vision towards colorblindness has been described with accuracy. Indeed colorblindness makes visual objects difficult to conceive for the brain never responds to the rays of colors.....a good description of the disease...
'Cure Divine may enlighten darkened minds'....I hope so too...Once again, a short poem that eaves a strong impact on the reader
Wow lot better than mine! lol.. haha! thnks for inviting me to read :) wonderful poem :)
short poem but strong message........'egoistic visions blurring the brain' this line highlights the poem and reveals lots of meaning.....brilliant poem.10+++ fgom lago
Brilliant! ! ! ! This our world! ! ! ! ! Egoistic visions blur our minds n souls.10++
Interesting compostion Kesav - well done. HG: -) xx
' Egoistic visions blurring the brain ' is the most beautiful and meaningful line in tnis poem. Realities of life are mostly black and white. Sometimes one has to be color blind, painful though...... Nice poem, Kesav. Regards Naseer
Deep thinking poetically expressed. Thanks for drawing my attention to this thought provoking poem...
Awesome Kesav! This is really deep and inspiring. Really enjoyed it! Jools
Very powerfull poem writen with alot of depth..... Sometimes things arent always what our eyes see..... Bonnie
Those who cannot see colours see the world in black and white. Great poem as always Kesav, best wishes, Andrew
that's a wonderful poem with a very pertinent social message. Thanks.
word by word you wrote are touching my heart.. beautiful poem..
‘…Cure Divine may enlighten darkened minds...’ Wonderful line Sir… Spectacles of delusion make us ‘pan-blind’…Wisdom [capital W] dispels it… Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10+++ for Cure Divine