Thursday, January 8, 2009

Color Blind… Comments

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Eyes color blind shut irritant to light,
egoistic visions blur the brain,
deter the mind from appreciating the virtues
in others, in the blessed environs
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 January 2010

‘…Cure Divine may enlighten darkened minds...’ Wonderful line Sir… Spectacles of delusion make us ‘pan-blind’…Wisdom [capital W] dispels it… Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10+++ for Cure Divine

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Raj Nandy 22 June 2009

A good thoughtful poem! After reading what is happening to our Indian students in Australia, a thought has occured in my mind, that may be if the world was colour blind, racial segregation would have been left behind! 10+ -Raj Nandy

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 07 June 2009

Colorblindness creeps in ones mind as a disability leading to catastrophic changes in life. Blurring of brain is an impairment that makes one more vulnerable and dependent. A disease well elaborated in poetic form. Regards Naseer

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Sameer Ahmed 07 June 2009

The exact phasic drift from normal vision towards colorblindness has been described with accuracy. Indeed colorblindness makes visual objects difficult to conceive for the brain never responds to the rays of colors.....a good description of the disease...

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Caterpillar MC 28 April 2009

'Cure Divine may enlighten darkened minds'....I hope so too...Once again, a short poem that eaves a strong impact on the reader

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Ana Zaldivar 26 April 2009

Wow lot better than mine! lol.. haha! thnks for inviting me to read :) wonderful poem :)

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rago rago 20 February 2009

short poem but strong message........'egoistic visions blurring the brain' this line highlights the poem and reveals lots of meaning.....brilliant poem.10+++ fgom lago

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Supriya Prathapan 17 February 2009

Brilliant! ! ! ! This our world! ! ! ! ! Egoistic visions blur our minds n souls.10++

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Original Unknown Girl 10 February 2009

Interesting compostion Kesav - well done. HG: -) xx

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 February 2009

' Egoistic visions blurring the brain ' is the most beautiful and meaningful line in tnis poem. Realities of life are mostly black and white. Sometimes one has to be color blind, painful though...... Nice poem, Kesav. Regards Naseer

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Muhammad Ali 02 February 2009

very effective. exellent. i want such thoughts more......

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 31 January 2009

amazing thought....nice...

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Sandra Martyres 28 January 2009

Deep thinking poetically expressed. Thanks for drawing my attention to this thought provoking poem...

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Krishna Baalu 28 January 2009

very good one indeed! Krishna Baalu

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Jools E. 27 January 2009

Awesome Kesav! This is really deep and inspiring. Really enjoyed it! Jools

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Bonnie Collins 26 January 2009

Very powerfull poem writen with alot of depth..... Sometimes things arent always what our eyes see..... Bonnie

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Andrew Blakemore 22 January 2009

Those who cannot see colours see the world in black and white. Great poem as always Kesav, best wishes, Andrew

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Sreelekha Premjit 22 January 2009

that's a wonderful poem with a very pertinent social message. Thanks.

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Little Morning Star 20 January 2009

word by word you wrote are touching my heart.. beautiful poem..

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Sathyanarayana M V S 19 January 2009

Wonderful poem. great style.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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