Eyes color blind shut irritant to light,
egoistic visions blur the brain,
deter the mind from appreciating the virtues
in others, in the blessed environs
A disease diagnosed easily by wisdom minds
The symptoms of hurting sadistic deeds and words
Ere restoring brightness to shut out unopened eyes,
Cure Divine may enlighten darkened minds
09 01 2009
short poem but strong message........'egoistic visions blurring the brain' this line highlights the poem and reveals lots of meaning.....brilliant poem.10+++ fgom lago
Brilliant! ! ! ! This our world! ! ! ! ! Egoistic visions blur our minds n souls.10++
Interesting compostion Kesav - well done. HG: -) xx
' Egoistic visions blurring the brain ' is the most beautiful and meaningful line in tnis poem. Realities of life are mostly black and white. Sometimes one has to be color blind, painful though...... Nice poem, Kesav. Regards Naseer
‘…Cure Divine may enlighten darkened minds...’ Wonderful line Sir… Spectacles of delusion make us ‘pan-blind’…Wisdom [capital W] dispels it… Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10+++ for Cure Divine
A good thoughtful poem! After reading what is happening to our Indian students in Australia, a thought has occured in my mind, that may be if the world was colour blind, racial segregation would have been left behind! 10+ -Raj Nandy
Colorblindness creeps in ones mind as a disability leading to catastrophic changes in life. Blurring of brain is an impairment that makes one more vulnerable and dependent. A disease well elaborated in poetic form. Regards Naseer
The exact phasic drift from normal vision towards colorblindness has been described with accuracy. Indeed colorblindness makes visual objects difficult to conceive for the brain never responds to the rays of colors.....a good description of the disease...
'Cure Divine may enlighten darkened minds'....I hope so too...Once again, a short poem that eaves a strong impact on the reader
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow lot better than mine! lol.. haha! thnks for inviting me to read :) wonderful poem :)