Wednesday, July 19, 2017

Color Blind Comments

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Oh stranger, my friend
I'm here
to make you understand
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Nick Kler
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Jefferson Carter 19 July 2017

Nick, this poem would be stronger if you focused on images instead of abstractions like ego, deception. Try reading some good black contemporary poets (Claudia Rankine, Terrance Hayes) . If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC

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