Nick, this poem would be stronger if you focused on images instead of abstractions like ego, deception. Try reading some good black contemporary poets (Claudia Rankine, Terrance Hayes) .
If you have time, check out my new website:
jeffersoncarterverse.com
Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC
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Nick, this poem would be stronger if you focused on images instead of abstractions like ego, deception. Try reading some good black contemporary poets (Claudia Rankine, Terrance Hayes) . If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC