Monday, November 9, 2015

Colonoscopy Comments

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Follows its ancient path,
As the serpent crawls in
Human plumpness,
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Ibrahim Ibn Salma
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Pamela Sinicrope 09 November 2015

Very interesting write. I'm very familiar with colonoscopy and wouldn't have characterized it this way...as a metaphor for an inner seeker...but yes, the metaphor carries through well. Nicely written! Thanks for sharing.

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Shakil Ahmed 09 November 2015

beautiful poem, well-penned, thanks for sharing

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Ibrahim Ibn Salma

Ibrahim Ibn Salma

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