No notice, events occur….ESP in sleep….two life has come… outlander....not human shape….but lively silhouette…..two hands…..left and right…they talk to knock each other….
Right: hi, You say something excellent idiotic!
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A wonderful poem Sarwar, well thought out whichever side of the brain you used, 10 Lynda xx
Another significant write...a piece to ponder.. a mind-working piece..GREAT many topics can be brought up with this... the left and right in the society..our ideology. our mentality....our perception towards things how our mind works...physically, psychologically, emotionally, spiritually, mentally and socially...in all aspects... the connection of being a right or left handed..i find this amusing for i am a left handed person...how it differs from the other the right and the left hemisphere of our brain.... how it affects my attitude...my mind..my being me... I love this...a write with great things to share... Thanks for sharing, my friend 10++++++++ Lovelots, Maia
I fully agree with Mamtaji. You have adroitly brought together disparate schools of thought and diverse emotions in this uniquely innovative piece.
congrats Sarwar, you have so skillfully interwoven science, theology, psychology, history, through this at times hilarious dialogue full of witticism(am still laughing at your choice of phrases and the colloquial style) wisdom, contradictions. you have presented all the frailities of human mind, eccentricities. its quite a colloquy, with lots of defensiveness, egoism and aggression.. left vs right - exceptionally creative.10+++++ Mamta
exceptional and interesting.....better to say it marvelous........great job sir...
wow sarwar another special only from YOU I love this colloquy-left vs right something unique certainly you deserve not 10 but many 100000000000000000's lots of love anjali
An excellent idea said in a different manner. Rgds Nooruddeen
sarwar, thanks alot for sharing this nice and meaning ful poem with me. its always a pleasure to read your unique and interesting style of poetry. i wish there would me more people to understand things in the manner you do. take care
The right hemispher and the left in fight and argument, refernce to history and the big divide in the head, body, very technical write to get to the theme with strong words. Your unique style.10
Quite interesting this piece is, philosophical arguments that no one will benefit, no lossers, no winners everything will be fine. Though the arguments, the dialogues are believable and also intellectual. Excellent write!
another unique creativity and nice write philosophical contrast between left and right...good job Sarwar.....10
LIKE DAY AND NIGHT, TRUE AND FALSE, YOU PRESENT A CONTRAST IN A VERY AMAZING MANNER. I GIVE YOU, IF POSSIBLE,100/10
wow you have an oceanic brain.....so innovative, great dialogues shared with fabulous theme and lessons to take from it...well done! ! ! 10+++++++++
Hats off Sarwar, marvellous idea. While left part of the brain is responsible for reasoning, the right pervades its lateral thinking and gives birth to creativity.Left and right brains have perpetual divergence as all through truly depicted in your poem, but finally ' All's well that ends well, ' conflicts of left and right end up with mutual convergence, which is also a reality.Scientists start with right brain and lead to the fruition of left brain.Musicians fiddle with the left brain in the beginning, promote their creations through the right.FANTASTIC.
As always my brother, your work swells with direction and insight...the knowledge that you express leaps from the page....With each new poem you create....Another shade of your poetic soul....shines through....amazing gift you have 10+++++
As usual this is wonderfully creative and your presentation from left vs right is detailed and interesting. It shows how 'sides' won't compromise. Great poem sarwar! 10 Karin
Left and Right are Radically DIFFERENT/ Left never ever Understand Right and Right never ever Understand Left. a good Philosophical poem transmit strong messages 10 for the Creativity Thanks For Sharing/
'a mode that talks'....the willingness to stand amidst the chaotic world gives.... a fighter of his own realm.....my hope and respect cloth you with wisdom .....to see life reflectively and lead your dream to a crucially face the point of departure .....an honest fight ends with strong determination..... go my friend ...i will be your shadow of loosing the grief of the world....stand for you ...God bless a 10+++++