Wednesday, January 30, 2008
Colloquy Of Ravens Comments
Rating: ★3.1
Two ravens looking down on the battlefield-
'Shall we pluck that lad's eyes? Bit of tripe, too? '
'Why not? Lad won't miss 'em! ' Eyelids peeled
and orbs swallowed in a trice! Lad lying askew
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Philip Housiaux
30 January 2008
Strong evocative word choice and imagery. Great long line control of phrases with with abab thoughout - something for me to study and learn from.Fine work.
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8/24/2025 5:55:04 PM # 1.0.0
a tip of the cap to edgar allan poe? i like the structure again here. reads like a free narrative and yet keeps its shape. i like