Tuesday, February 3, 2009

Collision Of Love. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Much distraction hides locked behind large doors
Leading to unhappy boredom with life,
Yet floating invitingly close, the core
Of contentment lies, framed, not by rife
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Fay Slimm
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Tia Maria 03 February 2009

You little celestial being you... that was wonderful! Love the title - well, ultimately great things do tend to begin with a big bang don't they: 0 10/10 Fay

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Herbert Nehrlich1 03 February 2009

Another beautiful poem from a big heart. One small tear detected in it but that may just be me. Yes, LOVE. Was there something else worth mentioning? Hxx

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Kris Smith 03 February 2009

Truely beautiful write here Fay warms one up on a snowy cold morning 10 +++ CHRIS

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Fay Slimm

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