Monday, November 25, 2013

College: Separation Comments

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If only I could know
What keeps a heart alive,
Or plant a seed to grow
The food to feed a soul,
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Brian Johnston
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Bri Edwards 19 June 2016

i THINK there is something good here. i liked the first stanza. ya lost me in the second one. bri :)

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 27 November 2013

Fantastic! the last line is splendid.

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