College Love Lost Comments

a narrative poem...hmmm....very well written with full of emotions, poetic sense and rhythm. it gives the readers a complete image when d poet falls in love with d girl in a class nd how his heart breaks after the class. this stanza rockz...literally...! ! ! ! 'I stood watching her a man in his pride Or a puppet on a string The rein with dainty finger-tips A man who would give all other bliss And all his worldly worthy for this To waste his whole heart in one kiss Upon her perfect lips ' u can make some corrections 4th line it'll be 'stones' 5th line 'only once' instead of 'but once' or correct it accordingly. anyways this poem deserves 10 on 10. njoyed reading it. :)