Saturday, December 7, 2013

College: Invitation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do not wait for rain
To hide your tears
Like a statue standing
Alone in a park,
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Brian Johnston
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Kay Vitter 20 December 2013

Nice! Brilliance in brevity and all that. A 10 from me.

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C. P. Sharma 19 December 2013

Very well penned. I would say: Why can't I be I? Copying others strenuously try In the fire-pan I fry! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! C. P. Sharma

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Shahzia Batool 19 December 2013

though stoics may not agree as you have presented your own point of view, the idea is impressive for originality, of course the point here is not to encourage someone to cry in public but to avoid pretension and screening...stay what you are! ! !

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Hazel Durham 10 December 2013

Beautiful write to allow ourselves to expose our great souls to a wounded world to embrace who we are.

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Heather Wilkins 09 December 2013

beautiful thoughts. nice presentation well thought out

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 December 2013

exquisitely done in few words. loved it.

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