Do not wait for rain
To hide your tears
Like a statue standing
Alone in a park,
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Very well penned. I would say: Why can't I be I? Copying others strenuously try In the fire-pan I fry! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! C. P. Sharma
though stoics may not agree as you have presented your own point of view, the idea is impressive for originality, of course the point here is not to encourage someone to cry in public but to avoid pretension and screening...stay what you are! ! !
Beautiful write to allow ourselves to expose our great souls to a wounded world to embrace who we are.
Nice! Brilliance in brevity and all that. A 10 from me.