Monday, June 10, 2019

Collect, Debrief, Restore Control Comments

Rating: 3.9

There were times the sun came down so close to me,
I felt that I had touched it almost lovingly.
Its warmth would clear my mind and heat my soul……
Collect, Debrief, Restore Control.
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Julia Luber
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And then I'd find myself regardless through and through. Unsure that it was me who needed to do what to do. For the reflection and the articulation, here is a full score.......10

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Julia Luber 25 June 2019

You're a very generous reader and rater; thank you!

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Here i am, dear Poetess, reading your beautiful poem - 'warming my mind and soul.' From what i have gathered after more than fifteen years of study of Indian Philosophy that it is important to know the opposites. For instance - the heat and the cold, happiness and sorrow, pure and impure. Only then, we can make a choice or a distinction. Absolutel Julia, the last verse says it all.

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Julia Luber 25 June 2019

I am so pleased you are reading Indian Philosophy into my poetry- such a rich and colorful culture you have; I am honored I have touched upon any of its perspectives over here so far away. I suppose Bollywood and Hollywood aren't so far apart in mind and soul!

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Julia Luber 13 June 2019

I'm surprised there are no responses to this one. I actually consider it might be the best of the sixteen I've posted!

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