sometimes love is like a superficial vein full of varicose,
swollen, twisted,
stretched to unsightly, non-existent,
unbearable
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Happy Valentine's Day Maria! I love your poem! I'm intrigued by your medical knowledge as revealed in this poem.
Happy VD tto, Rob! there is lots of poetry in our body, hidding... : )
Your poetic talent stands show-cased here, in this lovely poem. Congratulations, dear poet. Top score and added to MyFavourites.Thank you for sharing, dear poet
Thank you, Unnikrishnan Sivasankara! very much appreciated your words! Thank you for viziting!
Hi Maria, inimitable style of depicting love. Extraordinary brilliance in writing
Hi Unnikrishnan Sivasankara, and thank you deeply for your appreciation! It menas a lot to me! In means Inspiration&motivation! Blessings!
One of the most unique poems about love that I've had the pleasure of reading. The meataphor is beyond compare. Absolutely stunningly brilliant. An amazing piece of writing, Maria.
Hi Richard, it just happened. : ) Thank you for stopping by to read and write. It means a lot to me. You know someties you just scrabble apiece of paper and get lost in your feelings, toughts and a poem is born and it is hard to believe that you write & a poem is born! Gratitude!
All my gratitude for reading, Anil! Blessings& greta inspiration, Poet!
Maria, I'm grateful that love finds a way to be exposed. But still so much is hidden. Enjoyed returning to this poem!